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October 26, 2005

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Whitney Howell

Chelstan,
As a whole, you photo essay is easy to read and interesting. You introduction grabs the readers attention and your thesis is strong. Throughout the photo essay, you support your thesis with appealing information that keeps the reader’s attention. Also, a great attention getter is your choice of photos. The photos being in color really helps the post. I really like the ordering of the essay. Some things you might want to consider improving on are your explanations for some of the photos, a little more information would be nice. Overall, the post was really good and a lot of effort was put into it.

Whitney

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